Johorne

//**I am writng to expain what I think about atomic bombs or any bomb for that matter.I think bombs are bad because they are too strong and deadly.We have enough bombs to destroy the earth over and over again,it could wipe out the whole human race and eveything els on earth. Good strong viewpoint Jo, make sure you always explain what you are going to explain in your explanation.

In the ending of world war II,the USA built two atomic bombs to bomb some cities in Japan.**// ====//In the first couple of months the amount of people killed by the bomb was 90,000-166,000 people in Hiroshima and 60,000-80,000 in Nagasaki. Great data! This is a great way to backup your viewpoint. //====

//** ­ They are huge weapons of mass distraction. In the USA they were testing them out - all the men hide in large holes dug out of the ground, as the bomb plunged towards the hard ground and BANG, a big mushroom cloud went up in the air.When the men looked out of their holes the shock was shooting along the ground like a bullet. Imagine what all the bomb could do to the earth. **// //**It is so dangerous to have them around, but I guess there`s no way to get rid of them, because no matter what we do we’ll hurt someone or something. If we had another war and people decided to use an atomic bomb, so many people would die or get hurt and all their friends would be grieving. **// //**What makes an atomic bomb so powerful?**////**Nuclear bombs involve 3 forces strong and weak, that hold the nucleus of an atom together especially atoms with unstable nuclei. There are two basic ways that nuclear energy can be released from an atom. Wow! Great description, maybe this could be explained in your 2nd paragraph. Try to add a good conclusion at the end to wrap up your explanation of A bombs. **//