Caleb



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 * A BOMBS**

The bombs w have today are big enough to blow up the hole world. The hole idea of bmbs are to eliminate things and blow thm up. Especiallyin wars. When world war 3 comes we will be thank full because they will save our country. The bobms can be used i a good way and a bad way. They are sooooo expencive so heaps of rich and welthy can buy them. And posibly blow up our world. Good to see you have stated the positives and negatives. This will make the reader interested in your explanation.

To me this is he end of he world. The world could change so much if all the people with these bombs are to me ... well dangerouse. Who knows what they could do with these bombs. For all we know they could be carrying one in there pocket. Great personal comments.

These bombs are made of steal and a hole lot of gun powder. When these things go off they leave so much destruction of clouds, wind and noise the process of an A bomb going off is amazing. First it gets droped then a big mushroom cloud then a big bang and then a hole lot of dust and wind. This paragraph could be earlier in your explanation.

All the mess an A bomb leave's is trawmatick and very sad. But saves our coutry. But if you hink about these bombs what if a metior was coming down to earth the only way we can stop it is with these A bombs but sure they do kill alot of people and make a lot of mess. Well thats all i have to say about the A bomb. Excellent topic based words Caleb, leaving the reader with a question is very potent for the reader.

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