Tom

An A Bomb must be stable when it is being constructed because a vital mistake can destroy a quater of a plant so the formula must be made made by experts either way it will take you out in a blink of an eye it has no meaning for it's purpose, why do we have them if we are not going to use them. Interesting beginning paragraph Tom. Maybe you could explain to the reader what you are about to explain about the A bomb.

It has an up side like, it can defend a country if it's under attack but in all that glory come's a down side, like if the country that it is defending misses the target it may destroy a quarter of the country. Wow excellent words you have used. Really effective! what thay should of done was decrease the power because there are enough Abomb's on the planet to blow it up 100 time's over and over again.

Great start Tom, lets see what other information you have.